Me being confusing was the most important thing to change in my summary because it doesn't flow very well and it isn't clear. More importantly my spelling and grammar, I didn't take enough of my time to look over my summary or my reflection carefully. I needed more peer response to review and check my summary before I turned it in. My summary is indirect it's very confusing, and worded horrible. In the first paragraph second sentence I was trying to say that people should believe in phenomenal things as they are learning so that writing can become interesting and fun to the students. In this process of my writing I didn't do a rough draft I just winged it meaning that I went off my first draft that I reread multiple times and turned it in.
In the future I plan to change these issues by making a shitty rough draft first, then a rough draft, then a second rough draft, and finally a copy. This will help me because I will have multiple drafts and can have a lot of people help me to revise it and check and correct my paper.
Drafting effectively is definitely a key to making a good final product. Also, (yes, I know this might be embarrassing) you might try reading your essay aloud (especially when you are editing your final draft)--it can really help you identify when your wording gets a little off. Just make sure to read it exactly as it is written.
ReplyDeleteOverall, your blog looks good so far. Keep adding reading notes as we go (it'll keep the readings fresher in your mind).