What is the differences between the sample reflections. Which do you feel is better? Why?

Sample one portfolio was about how the writers was given feedback and used it to help them write their paper as well as what they learned out of English 1010 their weakest and strongest of their own writing. The writer had a strong thesis for the reflective argument they stated what they were going to talk about but they did not go in order but everything in the thesis was covered. Sample three talks about how the writer improved in their writing they did not doubt themselves but writing was their weakest subject. They did plenty of research and was going off topic but also coming back as well. I feel that sample one is better and my reason why is because the writer is more detailed and explainable because of her thesis statement the writer had everything in the thesis but was not in order but still talked about it all. In sample three the writer only put a few things in their thesis but was talking about way more then what was in their.